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R1VEN's Introduction - A Nightmare came true

Post by Guest on Wed Jul 17, 2013 8:51 pm

Riven had finally found a decent place to sleep. After 2 days walking along the river in a search for a new city she had found not a city, but a small village with poor but good people.
And that's what she liked in people; although they were poor, they had no problem giving food and a place too stay for the time she'd like to.

She was forced to leave the city she had been before because people were greedy and didn't trusted strangers, and Riven felt bad being in a city where everyone was looking at her, and talking about her in secret.
As she was sleeping, she was having a terrible nightmare; All the scene of her city being destroyed was popping out and there was nothing she could do but watch the suffering of her people, helpless.

Suddenly, she wakes up. She realizes she was all sweaty and breathing really fast. Riven looked around and in a blink of an eye a strange human appeared.
She looked at her shadow and realized it wasnt an human. The creature was moving towards her and Riven imediately grabbed her sword that was under her pillow and pointed at the creature. In vain.
The creature kept walking towards her and Riven had no chance but slice it with her sword. Once again in vain, cause the creature wasn't there anymore, all she sliced was air.
Riven looked around and it was gone. As she was trying to sleep again, she looked above and the creature was standing on the ceiling, but this time Riven saw more than its shadow, its eyes. They were Red and purely evil.
She knew her sword couldnt hit it so she gave up and dropped her sword, hopeless of getting out of there alive.

The creature suddenly started speaking:

Lilynette - I see you realized your sword can't and won't hit me. Well, to your luck, I'm not here to kill you. At least for now, if you don't give me any trouble. My name's Lilynette and I realized you know how to fight, especially with that little sword of yours.
And I know a place where you can fight and reveal all your potencial.

Riven - I'm not going anywhere! You're evil, I don't want nothing from you or your kind!

Lilynette - There's nothing you can do about it. If I want you to come with me, you'll come with me. Poor human, your soul transpires anger. I know what happened to you and your little hometown. Destroyed by invaders. It was a bloody conflict, which I really enjoyed watching.
Thats why I'm here. You have to come with me, so your fighting potencial can be truly revealed and you can revenge your beloved ones.

*Suddenly, a Red portal appereared in front of them*

Riven - So to get stronger, all I have to do is to step on that portal... Forgive me people of Noxus for cooperating with the Evil, but I have to do it, here I go!

*Riven steps onto the portal and dissapears*

*Lilynette smiles delvishly and the scene ends*

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Post by Sephira on Wed Jul 17, 2013 8:56 pm

Looks great. I will edit my speech parts to fit closer to Lilynette's style and maybe extend it and possibly add the addition of Sakuya who is basically Lilynette's right hand person.
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Post by Sephira on Wed Jul 17, 2013 9:27 pm

Modification, need you to possibly add more actions for yourself Razz


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Riven had finally found a decent place to sleep. After 2 days walking along the river in a search for a new city she had found not a city, but a small village with poor but good people.

And that's what she liked in people; although they were poor, they had no problem giving food and a place too stay for the time she'd like to.

She was forced to leave the city she had been before because people were greedy and didn't trusted strangers, and Riven felt bad being in a city where everyone was looking at her, and talking about her in secret.

As she was sleeping, she was having a terrible nightmare; All the scene of her city being destroyed was popping out and there was nothing she could do but watch the suffering of her people, helpless.

Suddenly, she wakes up. She realizes she was all sweaty and breathing really fast. Riven looked around and in a blink of an eye a strange human appeared.

She looked at her shadow and realized it wasn't an human. The creature was moving towards her and Riven immediately grabbed her sword that was under her pillow and pointed at the creature. In vain.

The creature kept walking towards her and Riven had no chance but slice it with her sword. Once again in vain, cause the creature wasn't there anymore, all she sliced was air.

Riven looked around and it was gone. As she was trying to sleep again, she looked above and the creature was standing on the ceiling, but this time Riven saw more than its shadow, its eyes. They were Red and purely evil.
She knew her sword couldn't hit it so she gave up and dropped her sword, hopeless of getting out of there alive.

The creature suddenly started speaking:

Lilynette -How adorable, you just realized your sword can't and won't hit me. Well, to your luck, I'm not actually here to kill you.

Lilynette suddenly vanished as Riven looks stunned. Suddenly she appears directly before Riven, placing her fingers underneath Rivens chin, moving her lips close to Rivens.

Lilynette: At least... for now. Providing, you don't give me any trouble.

Lilynette moves her lips close to Rivens ear, breathing faintly against her, her cold breath sending a chill down Rivens skin.

Lilynette: They call me Lilynette, and I have seen how you fight... with that little sword of yours.

Suddenly Lilynette's slides her hand down, grabbing the sword from Riven's hand before swiftly holding it before Riven, the tip of the blade touching the tip of Rivens chin.

Lilynette: I know just the place for you to fight, one that would use your full potential.

Riven's expression goes from shock to anger, as she screams towards Lilynette.

Riven - I'm not going anywhere! You're evil, I don't want nothing from you or your kind!

Lilynette pushes the blade against Rivens throat, the point of the blade slowly piercing into Rivens skin. She grins deviously at Riven.

Lilynette: There's not much you can do about it. If I want you to come with me, then you will come with me. If not...

Lilynette swiftly swings the sword away, facing the blade towards the sky as she admires the craftsmanship.

Lilynette: Poor little human, your soul transpires anger. I know what happened to you and your little hometown. Destroyed by invaders. It was a bloody conflict, which I really enjoyed watching.

Lilynette moves the sword against her lips, her lips kissing the cold steel. Suddenly the sword begins to disintegrate before Rivens eyes, leaving onto the sheath left in Lilynette's hands. Lilynette tosses the sheath to the floor before her and slowly begins to walk towards Riven.

Lilynette: And That's why I'm here.

Lilynette approaches Riven, stepping slowly but firmly on the Shealth before her. As Riven watches, Lilynette crushes it into the ground under her boot, leaving a slime like patch of molten steel in the shape of a foot print in the aftermath.

Lilynette: You have to come with me, surely you want your fighting potential to be realised... your loved ones to be avenged...

Suddenly, a Red portal appeared behind Lilynette. She turn's to the side, her arm held out, guiding Riven to the Portal.

Riven: So to get stronger, all I have to do is to step on that portal... Forgive me people of Noxus for cooperating with the Evil, but I have to do it, here I go!

Riven walks towards the portal. Stopping beside Lilynette and signs before stepping onto the portal and disappearing.

Lilynette picks a rock from the ground and holds it in the palm of her hand. She begins to crush it into the dust and places her hand flat, blowing the dirt that remains into the wind as she smiles devilishly.
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Re: R1VEN's Introduction - A Nightmare came true

Post by Guest on Wed Jul 17, 2013 11:05 pm

The modifications were great, thanks, English isn't my main language so there are some words I don't know or don't remember to use at the time

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Post by Sephira on Wed Jul 17, 2013 11:13 pm

Don't worry about it, I normally like to read peoples RP's and tweak them a little, I'm very much an action person not a speaker though. Should be a few gaps to add more speech and movement on Rivens parts
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