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The Mark's Flashback

Post by The Mark on Fri Aug 16, 2013 9:27 am

A man quickly gives a few looks around before entering a dark alleyway of a big city. As he enters, he stops and looks up to a painted 'M' and nods, knowing he's in the right place.

Meanwhile, in a shaded corner, a cloaked figure keeps his eyes on the man that entered his territory.

For nearly a half hour, the man that has entered his territory remains where he is and does not look suspicious enough to be a cop.

With some decent acrobatics, the cloaked figure lands close to the other man.

???: It's true what I've heard about you, then.

The cloaked figure remains quiet as the man pulls out an envelope.

???: Inside is an advance on your pay, the target, and how he needs to be taken care of.

The cloaked figure accepts the envelope and opens it, revealing a photo of a man with dark blonde hair, $2,000, and a detailed list.

The cloaked figure reads over the list before speaking.

The Mark: Ending price will be $8,500. Rather generous both considering my mood and the complexity of what you expect me to do.

The man seems wary to respond at the high price.

???: It only seems complex on paper, but when you do it, I can assure you, it will be the easiest work you will have.

The Mark tilts his head up, his face still hidden under the shadow of his cap.

The Mark: You want me to lower my already gracious price?

The Mark seems to glide rather quickly toward the man before he forcibly lifts him on his shoulders and lands in a Samoan Drop and effortlessly stands back up and stares down the gasping man as he wraps his arms around his waist.

The Mark: I can read you so well. An underling of who I should be speaking with, am I wrong?

The Mark now stands above the man, looking down at the frightened figure.

The Mark: So the question becomes, will she see me now? Or will I have to send you back as a response?

The man tries to get up as The Mark moves around him.

The Mark reaches in his pocket and pulls out a bottle and rag
soaking the rag, The Mark covers the mouth and nose of the opponent with the rag to knock him out executing a Fantastic Chloroform
The Mark keeps his strong submission hold

The man struggles for a few more moments before he finally rolls his eyes to the back of his head and goes unconscious.

A slow clap is heard, making The Mark quickly hide his bottle and rag.

Lilynette: Well done, very well done.

The Mark now sees a woman approach him, readying for a street fight.

The Mark: You sent him.

Lilynette raises an eyebrow, feigning curiosity.

Lilynette: And how are you so sure?

The Mark holds up a strand of long hair.

The Mark: I know that this particular strand came from that head of yours. Considering you seem unsurprised by my accusation and the fact that I have injured and knocked out a man that had this hair on his person, I can bet you are higher up in the chain of command.

Lilynette: The highest.

The Mark and Lilynette both remain quiet as the sounds of the city continue.

The Mark: I'll explain the price as I have be-

Lilynette holds a hand up for The Mark to stop.

Lilynette: You aren't making the offer this time, instead, I am. A one-way trip to my world. You will fight as I see fit, and if you survive, then you can be a very rich man.

The Mark eyes Lilynette carefully before making a response.

The Mark: Before I go, I have a small thing that must be taken care of.

The Mark approaches the man he's knocked out and pulls out a knife, making an 'M' on his left hand.

The Mark: And as for your envelope...

The Mark pulls out the $2,000 and hides it inside his coat before turning back to Lilynette.

The Mark: I'll tell you now, if you have lied to me about making me a 'rich' man, I will end your life.

Lilynette opens her portal to her realm and directs The Mark to it.

As The Mark and Lilynette step forward into the portal, she looks back at the man she controlled to create this introduction. With a wicked grin she closes the portal to the sound of a crack and splattering of liquid.

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Post by Sephira on Fri Aug 16, 2013 9:35 am

Very, very impressed. I will make minor modifications to Lilynette's parts soon, mainly adding actions and rewording her more to her style.
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Re: The Mark's Flashback

Post by The Mark on Fri Aug 16, 2013 11:08 am

Lilynette wrote:Very, very impressed. I will make minor modifications to Lilynette's parts soon, mainly adding actions and rewording her more to her style.
Yeah, I didn't really know how she'd act so I just winged it.
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Re: The Mark's Flashback

Post by Sephira on Fri Aug 16, 2013 11:27 am

You wouldn't; even people who have been here since the start still don't know how she'd act; I made my character's fairly difficult to write as such.
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