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Dogpyle + Vicious VS Raven + Hawk (Ready for Commentary)

Post by Sephira on Mon Sep 02, 2013 5:05 am

*Custom ending

The two wrestlers stare proudly at each other
and then engage in a exciting test of strength, trying to overcome their opponent
after a few, seemingly endless, seconds and an enormous effort Dogpyleprevails
Dogpyle approaches Hawk
and executes a light Throat Thrust hitting his opponent to the neck!!
Dogpyle turns giving his shouldres to the adversary
Hawk eludes the attempt of a Mule Kick and he takes back the initiative
Hawk lifts Dogpyle up while he's turned back, holding him by his head and his back
and he crashes him with his whole power to the ground by performing a strongCannon Ball Buster!!
Hawk bounces against the ropes
Dogpyle dodges the Big Splash Pin, taking the initiative
Dogpyle gets close to his opponent and jumps
and strikes him with a punch executing a light Fist Drop!!
Dogpyle grabs Hawk's hair
Dogpyle grabs one Hawk's arms and spins, swinging him into the ropes, then lunges himself as well
Dogpyle charges his elbow
to hit Hawk in the back of the head with a light Back Elbow Smash!!
Dogpyle grabs Hawk's hair
Dogpyle grabs one of his opponent's arms and swings him into the ropes
Dogpyle runs toward Hawk grasping his head
and leaps driving him down to the ground performing a strong Running DDT!!
Dogpyle rushes towards his rival on the ground
to hitt him straight with a punch, performing a violent Fist Drop!!
Dogpyle sees Hawk laying on the ground, jumps on the turnbuckle
and leaps towards Hawk with a half flip, slamming back first on him executing Fantastic Swanton Bomb!!
Hawk pulls himself together and fights back
Hawk approaches his rival loading his arm
Dogpyle droops quickly dodging a Throat Thrust
Dogpyle gets ready to hit Hawk
and hits rapidly with his forearm his opponnent's jaw executing a violentEuropean Uppercut!!
Dogpyle turns against the adversary
and hits hime with a strong Mule Kick on the groin!!
Dogpyle performs a backflip, using the top rope as a springboard
and grabs his opponent's neck wrapping his arm around it, and slams him head first on the mat with a violent Springboard Bulldog!!
Dogpyle approaches to his laying opponent and falls down
to hitt him straight with a punch, performing a Fantastic Fist Drop!!
TOOOOOOUUUUCCCCCCCHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!
Hawk gives the touch to Raven who enters the ring!
Raven grabs his opponent's head
and hits him right into the face with the knee, executing a light Knee on Head!!
Raven charges his arm
Dogpyle dodges the Fist But and takes the initiative
Dogpyle tucks Raven's head in his armpit
falling backward slamming Raven's head into the mat with a FantasticDDT!!
Dogpyle grabs Raven's hair
Dogpyle locks the opponent's head under his arm
Raven avoids the DDT with a punching combination taking the initiative
Raven seems ready to hit his opponent
and hits Dogpyle with a series of kicks executing violent Kicking Combination!!
Raven pulls Dogpyle still groggy, by his hair
Raven loads his opponent on his shoulders horizontally
Dogpyle gets off his rival's shoulders dodging a Torture Rack and takes back the initiative
Dogpyle blocks the supine opponenent holding him by the head
and making a twist of 180° slams his face on the ground connecting a IncredibleTwisting DDT!!
UNBELIEVABLE!!!! the impact of this blow is so hard that Raven has fallen out of the ring!!!!
Dogpyle leaves the ring
Dogpyle jumps from the apron ring and grasps Raven
to perform a Incredible Flying DDT from Apron to Outside the Ring!!!!!
RAVEN HAS A CUT!!!
Dogpyle removes out the rugs leaving the cement free from the protections
to crash the adversary on it with a powerful Powerslam on the Table!!!!
Dogpyle jumps from the apron ring
and makes his rival fall on the steel steps with a Fantastic Head Scissor on Step Ladder!!!!!
Dogpyle lifts the adversary on a shoulder
to crash the adversary on it with a Fantastic Powerslam on the Table!!!!
Dogpyle jumps from the apron ring
then he takes his rival's head among the legs to make it crush onto the step ladder, performing a Fantastic Head Scissor on Step Ladder!!!!
Dogpyle goes up again in the ring
Raven goes up again in the ring
Dogpyle gets ready to hit Raven
and hits him with the forearm executing an Fantastic European Uppercut!!
Dogpyle lifts Raven on his shoulders
Vicious Wolf climb the turnbuckle performing a flying clothesline on Raven executing a Fantastic Doomsday device!!
TOOOOOOUUUUCCCCCCCHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!
Raven touches Hawk suddenly entering the ring!
Hawk holds his opponent by the head
and lows his face with the knee to perform a strong Knee on Head!!
Hawk charges his arm
Dogpyle dodges the Fist But and takes the initiative
Dogpyle bounces off, using the top rope
and while in mid-air, grabs his opponent's head slamming it on the ground, connecting with a strong Springboard Bulldog!!
Dogpyle grabs Hawk's hair
Dogpyle grabs one of his opponent's arms and swings him into the ropes
Dogpyle runs toward Hawk grasping his head
and drives him down to the ground performing a strong Running DDT!!
Dogpyle is about to perform his taunt
Dogpyle executing A Taunt
TOOOOOOUUUUCCCCCCCHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!
Dogpyle gives the touch to Vicious Wolf who enters the ring!
Vicious Wolf grabs Hawk executing a backbreaker
Dogpyle bounces on the top rope executing a flying legdrop performing a violentBackbreaker & flying legdrop!!
Vicious Wolf grabs Hawk's hair
Vicious Wolf lunges himself on the ropes
Vicious Wolf runs toward Hawk and jumps
and hooks his arm driving him down to the ground, performing a light Running Arm Drag!!
Vicious Wolf grabs his opponent's legs crossing them
locking him in a light Texas Cloverleaf imitating the famous "Lasso from el Paso"!!
Vicious Wolf keeps his weak submission hold
Vicious Wolf keeps his ruthless submission hold
Vicious Wolf releases his grasp
Vicious Wolf is about to perform his taunt
Vicious Wolf Howls into the air. executing A Howl
Vicious Wolf cross his opponent's legs,
Hawk easily escapes the opponent's Sharpshooter, retaking the upper hand
Hawk grabs his opponent's leg
then he tries to cause pain on his back by pulling on it, executing a strong One Leg Boston Crab!!
Vicious Wolf escapes from the hold
Vicious Wolf quickly gets up and counterattacks!
Vicious Wolf prepares to strike the adversary
performing a light Punch!!
Vicious Wolf brings his foot up
then drops it into Hawk executing an light Axe Kick!!
Vicious Wolf places himself behind his opponent
blocks his arms and joining his fingers behind his rival's head, executes a lightFull Nelson!!
Vicious Wolf keeps his weak submission hold
Vicious Wolf keeps his ruthless submission hold
Vicious Wolf releases his grasp
Hawk pulls himself together and fights back
Hawk approaches the opponent
Vicious Wolf droops quickly dodging a Throat Thrust
Vicious Wolf prepares the back of his hand
hitting Hawk across the chest with a light Back Hand Chop while the crowd yells WOOOOOOO!!!
Vicious Wolf prepares his arm
and falls on Hawk with his fist executing a light Fist But!!
Vicious Wolf places himself behind his opponent
and grasps his arms blocking them joining his hands behind his rival's head, performing a light Caught You Now !!
Vicious Wolf keeps his ruthless submission hold
Vicious Wolf keeps his excruciating submission hold
Vicious Wolf releases his grasp
Vicious Wolf is about to perform his taunt
Vicious Wolf Howls into the air. executing A Howl
Vicious Wolf grabs Hawk's hair
Vicious Wolf blocks Hawk grabbing the head with the arm
and quickly turns the body making Hawk's head slam on the ground executing a light Twist of Fate!!
Vicious Wolf is about to perform his taunt
Vicious Wolf Howls into the air. executing A Howl
Hawk pulls himself together and fights back
Hawk prepares his arm to strike the adversary
hitting him with a light Punch!!
Hawk strongly grabs the head of the adversary
Vicious Wolf lowers avoiding a a Hard Headbutt, taking back the initiative
Vicious Wolf grabs his opponent
and crushes his head on the ground to perform an light Inverted DDT!!
Vicious Wolf grabs Hawk's ankle
twisting it in an irregular way executing an strong Time For Torture !!
Vicious Wolf keeps his excruciating submission hold
Hawk escapes from the hold
Hawk quickly gets up and counterattacks!
Hawk approaches Vicious Wolf
and gives a blow to his throat executing a violent Throat Thrust!!
TOOOOOOUUUUCCCCCCCHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!
Vicious Wolf touches Dogpyle suddenly entering the ring!
Dogpyle goes towards his rival
and hits him to his throat with a violent Throat Thrust!!
Dogpyle turns giving his shouldres to the adversary
to hit him with a Fantastic Mule Kick there in his "secret"!!!
Dogpyle is ready to hit Hawk
executing a violent Knee Smash!!
Dogpyle grabs Hawk's head
forcing Hawk to dive onto his head with a violent DDT!!
Dogpyle is about to perform his taunt
Dogpyle executing A Taunt
Hawk pulls himself together and fights back
Hawk prepares his arm to strike the adversary
and hits the adversary with a light Punch!!
Hawk brings his foot up
Dogpyle dodges the a Axe Kick taking the initiative
Dogpyle locks Hawk's head under his arm
then drops backwards smashing Hawk's head into the mat performing a Fantastic DDT!!

Naneal: And Dogpyle hits the DDT right on the mark!
Airi: Dogpyle and Vicious Wolf dominant so far...see Naneal? They don't need Chris!

Raven gets in the ring, runs at Dogpyle and hits him with a POWERFUL clothesline

Vicious Wolf gets in the ring, runs at Raven and attempts to hit him with a clothesline
But Raven ducks, dodging the move, which causes Wolf to hit the referee!!

Naneal: The ref is down!!

Raven attempts to Irish whip Vicious Wolf out of the ring, but Wolf lands on the apron, which causes Raven to run at him and hit him with a FANTASTIC clothesline that sends them both crashing to the outside!

Airi: Complete chaos in the ring!

Hawk gets up before Dogpyle and starts to move towards his grounded opponent

But suddenly, a woman slides in the ring with a steel chair! The woman approaches Hawk and hits him on the back of the head with a steel chair executing a MORTAL steel chair shot!!

The woman quickly slides out of the ring and Dogpyle goes for the pin!

Dogpyle tries a pinning maneuver
Referee starts counting...
Referee: ....Oneeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee....
Referee: ....Twooooooooooooooooo....
Referee: ....Threeeeeeeeeeeeeeee....
DOGPYLE and VICIOUS WOLF WIN THE MATCH AND DEFEAT THE TEAM OF RAVEN AND HAWK

Airi: New champions! New champions!
Naneal: No! No! Not like this! They can't be allowed to keep those titles!!


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Re: Dogpyle + Vicious VS Raven + Hawk (Ready for Commentary)

Post by Sephira on Fri Sep 06, 2013 6:29 am

I believe this being done Custom, so please do not do commentary.
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Re: Dogpyle + Vicious VS Raven + Hawk (Ready for Commentary)

Post by Guest on Fri Sep 06, 2013 7:08 am

Lilynette wrote:I believe this being done Custom, so please do not do commentary.
Commentary can be done for everything except the ending.

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Re: Dogpyle + Vicious VS Raven + Hawk (Ready for Commentary)

Post by Sephira on Fri Sep 06, 2013 8:02 am

Alright' I'll put it up for ready; only the Razor and John's to go
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Re: Dogpyle + Vicious VS Raven + Hawk (Ready for Commentary)

Post by Guest on Sat Sep 07, 2013 4:04 am

It's 100% ready now.

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Re: Dogpyle + Vicious VS Raven + Hawk (Ready for Commentary)

Post by Guest on Sat Sep 07, 2013 4:09 am

I will still be adding some ladder parts to it, I'll do the commentary along with it, if you don't mind.

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Re: Dogpyle + Vicious VS Raven + Hawk (Ready for Commentary)

Post by Guest on Sat Sep 07, 2013 8:19 am

A portal appears and Vicious Wolf and Dogpyle come out holding a ladder on each side marching to the ring in fast paced manner. They slide the ladder into the ring and another portal appears this time with Raven and Hawk coming out rushing to the ring as Dogpyle has already set the ladder attempting a shortcut win.
Camera shifts to the outside of the ring where Vicious Wolf meets Raven and they start to trade punches. The camera then shifts to the ring.
Hawk gets close to the climbing Dogpyle and hits him in the back as he goes down from the ladder and meets Hawk face to face
The two wrestlers stare proudly at each other
and then engage in a exciting test of strength, trying to overcome their opponent
after a few, seemingly endless, seconds and an enormous effort Dogpyle prevails
Dogpyle approaches Hawk
and executes a light Throat Thrust hitting his opponent to the neck!!
Dogpyle turns giving his shoulders to the adversary
Hawk eludes the attempt of a Mule Kick and he takes back the initiative
Hawk lifts Dogpyle up while he's turned back, holding him by his head and his back
and he crashes him with his whole power to the ground by performing a strong Cannon Ball Buster!!
Hawk bounces against the ropes
Dogpyle dodges the Big Splash Pin, taking the initiative
Dogpyle gets close to his opponent and jumps
and strikes him with a punch executing a light Fist Drop!!
Dogpyle grabs Hawk's hair
Dogpyle grabs one Hawk's arms and spins, swinging him into the ropes, then lunges himself as well
Dogpyle charges his elbow
to hit Hawk in the back of the head with a light Back Elbow Smash!!
While the dizzied Hawk is recovering Dogpyle puts the ladder together and drops in in the middle of the ring.
Dogpyle grabs Hawk's hair
Dogpyle grabs one of his opponent's arms and swings him into the ropes
Dogpyle runs toward Hawk grasping his head
and leaps driving him down to the ground face first into the ladder performing a strong Running DDT into the Ladder!!!
Dogpyle rushes towards his rival who is still grounded on the ladder
to hit him straight with a punch, performing a violent Fist Drop on the Ladder!!!
Dogpyle sees Hawk still laying on the ladder, jumps on the turnbuckle
and leaps towards Hawk with a half flip, slamming back first on him executing Fantastic Swanton Bomb throught the Ladder!!!

Nanael: Oh my goodnes. A stunning attack sequence by Dogpyle. Using the ladder as a weapon.

Airi: Awesome! More carnage! More!

The camera then shifts to Vicious Wolf and Raven where they are trading punches.

Vicious Wolf gets ready to hit Raven
and hits rapidly with his forearm his opponnent's jaw executing a violent European Uppercut!!

Camera then zooms out to see how Dogpyle launches himself over the top rope right into Raven as Vicious Wolf dodges.
While the already battered Dogpyle recovers with the grounder Raven, Vicious Wolf gets into the ring.
Vicious Wolf picks Hawk up from the ladder and hits with a devastating Clothesline!
The impact knocks Hawk into the corner.
Vicious Wolf then picks up the ladder and sets it in the middle of the ring.
Vicious Wolf starts to climb the ladder
Vicious Wolf reaches the top of the ladder
Vicious Wolf trys to reach the titles to gain the victory
and finally he reaches it!
But Hawk suddenly comes from behind and hits Vicious Wolf to the back with a fantastic steel chair shot!
The impact of the chair knocks Wolf on the ground.
Hawk then starts climbing the ladder.
He gets to the middle of the rope before Dogpyle comes into the ring.
He reaches for Hawk's shoulders and grasps them
Dogpyle then brings his knees up and drops Hawk on on the knees connecting with a Extreme Back Cracker from the Ladder!

Nanael: What an impact!

Airi: Hawk will feel that tomorrow. Ouch!

Hawk pulls himself together and fights back
Hawk approaches his rival loading his arm
Dogpyle droops quickly dodging a Throat Thrust
Dogpyle gets ready to hit Hawk
and hits rapidly with his forearm his opponnent's jaw executing a violent European Uppercut!!
Dogpyle turns against the adversary
and hits him with a strong Mule Kick on the groin!!
The impact of the Mule Kick forces Hawk into the ladder as the ladder collapses with Hawk on top of it
Dogpyle performs a backflip, using the top rope as a springboard
and grabs his opponent's neck wrapping his arm around it, and slams him head first on the mat with a violent Springboard Bulldog into the Ladder!!
Dogpyle approaches to his laying opponent and falls down
to hitt him straight with a punch, performing a Fantastic Fist Drop on the Ladder!!
Both men are then lying into the ring as camera goes to the ringside where Vicious Wolf and Raven are fighting right along the announcers table used by Sigui and Taki.
Vicious Wolf charges the leg
to strike Raven's head with an Fantastic Overhead Kick
As the impact makes him get onto the announcers table.
Vicious Wolf then gets into the ring. He first looks at the ladder and the grounded Dogpyle. He then climbs on the top turnbuckle.
Vicious Wolf jumps from the top rope with his elbow fold
and executes a LEGENDARY Elbow Drop from The top turnbuckle through the announcers table!!!
The impact completely destroys the table as a carnage can be seen in the ring and ringside area with the fans going crazy.
All 4 men are grounded when Dogple and Hawk both get up with the help of the ropes going on pure adrenaline.
Hawk grabs Dogpyle's head
and hits him right into the face with the knee, executing a light Knee on Head!!
Hawk charges his arm
Dogpyle dodges the Fist But and takes the initiative
Dogpyle tucks Hawk's head in his armpit
falling backward slamming Hawk's head into the mat with a Fantastic DDT!!
He then takes the chair that was used earlier in the match and drops it in a spot he feels necessary.
Dogpyle tucks Hawk's head in his armpit
falling backward slamming Hawks's head into the grounded chair with a Fantastic DDT into the chair!!
HAWK HAS A CUT!!!

Nanel: Blood...

Airi: It was about time!!!

Dogpyle then starts to climb the ladder extremely slowly as he's spent trying to reach the seemingly unreachable titles.
Hawk with struggle gets up and hits Dogpyle with the bloodied chair to the back.
Hawk holds Dogpyle's arms hooking them
and throws him backward into the turnbuckle performing a Extreme Double Under Hook Suplex into the Turnubuckle.
Dogpyle is left hanging upside down on the turnbuckle as Hawk pushes the ladder into Dogpyle.
And runs from the turnbuckle in the opposite corner right into Dogpyle and connects with a low dropkick as the ladder connects with Dogpyle's entire body and Hawk being on the ground checking his legs.
The camera shifts to ringside where Vicious Wolf and Raven are slowly getting up still trying to inflict damage on each other.
Vicious Wolf grabs Raven by his right arm and swings him into the ring post!
RAVEN HAS A CUT!!!
Vicious Wolf then grabs Raven by his neck and pushes him into the ring.
He then goes under the ring and pulls out a table and pushes it into the ring and puts it into the free corner in the left hand bottom corner.
He picks up Raven and Irish Whips him into the Table
But Raven stops right in front of the Table.
Turns around and both Vicious Wolf and Raven start running at each other
They both pick up their right arms and connect with clotheslines respectively and both drop onto the mat hitting the ladder dropped from the impact.
Grounded Dogpyle grabs the chair and uses it with his right hand to help him stand up as he is clearly dizzy and barely standing on his feet.
He picks up the Table and sets it up on all of it's legs.
He then sets up the ladder on the other side from the table and runs to Vicious Wolf and helps him get up as both men start to point fingers and strategize.

Nanael: What are they planning now? Can't be anything good.

Airi: Are you serious? This is amazing!

Vicious Wolf gets outside of the ring.
He then takes a look under the ring.
He pushes in another Ladder, a chair and another table and some liquid that he takes in his arm that looks to be easily flammable.
Dogpyle then takes both ladder and sets it up right along each other as both ladders look towards the set up table.
Vicious Wolf gets into the ring and picks up the chair that he just slid into the ring. He picks up the bloodied Hawk. Pushes him into the free corner and smashes him right into the face with the chair.
RAVEN IS BLEEDING PREFUSELY!
The camera then shifts to Dogpyle who has picked up the chair that has already been through it's war and starts using the last of it on the back of Hawk.
He hits him countless times viciously until the chair is unusable and is left in many parts.
Vicious Wolf then picks up the liqiud and starts pouring it onto the table as the crowd gets excited.
They then put the table on fire with a lighter.
As the table is on fire they carefully put another table on top of it.
Dogpyle then picks up Hawk on his shoulders and
Vicious Wolf picks Raven on his shoulders and they both start climbing their respective ladders slowly and carefully with the knocked out bodies on top of them.
They both get on the top of their ladders and look at each other. Dogpyle can be seen winking at Vicious Wolf and smiling as the blood of their opponents keep pouring on Dogpyle's and Wolf's shoulders.
Dogpyle puts Hawk in front of himself a couple of steps lower and grasps his arm around Hawk's neck.
Vicious Wolf at the same time drops himself a couple of steps lower so that he could pick Raven up in a powerbomb position.
They both then drop from the ladder at the same time through the burning stacked up tables.
Dogpyle twists his opponent 180°  by his head and lands him face first into the tables while connecting with his modified LEGENDARY Shooting Star Face Buster through the tables off a ladder!!!
Vicious Wolf drops his opponent off his shoulders into the tables with the momentum carrying him down as well as he connects with a LEGENDARY powerbomb from hell through a table off a ladder!!!

Nanael: Oh my goodness!!! We need medical attention here!

Airi: No such luck! The match is still going on!

The crowd goes crazy as all 4 men are down on the mat. The tables are shattered. There are burning marks on all 4 men. The ladders have been knocked over by the impact as they are holding themselves on the ropes.

Airi: Complete chaos in the ring! This is QBC right here! Yeah!!!

suddenly, a woman slides in the ring with a steel chair! The woman approaches Vicious Wolf and Dogpyle and helps them get back up. After a long battle she does it. She leaves both men standing against their respective corners as they can't stand up on their own.
She then picks up both ladders and sets them up so the titles could be picked up.
She then gets Vicious Wolf on her shoulder and helps him walk up to the ladder and then helps him get up on it. He grabs a one of the tag titles off and then hits the ground hard grasping the title.
The woman then walks up to Dogpyle and helps him get up to the ladder. Dogpyle seems to be a bit more recovered as he grabs the title off and the ring bell sounds for the win of Dogpyle and Vicious Wolf.
DOGPYLE and VICIOUS WOLF WIN THE MATCH AND DEFEAT THE TEAM OF RAVEN AND HAWK!!!
Announcer: And your new Queen's Guard Champions! Dogpyle and Vicious Wolf!!
Dogpyle then slowly gets off the ladder as the Woman is jumping up and down in celebration, but Dogpyle and Vicious Wolf are too spent to celebrate at this time.
They both look with sweat and blood pouring down. They nod at each other and slide out of the ring under the bottom rope.
The woman goes in between them and Vicious Wolf and Dogpyle both lean their hands around the womans seemingly strong shoulders.
They then start walking backwards with the titles held high and their hands down in exhaustion.
A portal appears and they leave the ringside with the thunderous crowd right after a great match.

Airi: New champions! New champions!
Naneal: No! No! Not like this! They can't be allowed to keep those titles!! Who is that girl? She wasn't supposed to help them!
Airi: Oh get over it already! The match was amazing! Dogpyle and Vicious Wolf, the new Guard Champions of QBC. And rightfully so. What a show!

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