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The beginning of Pain

Post by Pain on Tue Sep 17, 2013 6:04 pm

The scene shows a man, attached by chains on a wall in a dark prison cell. The only light source is the small opening in his cell wall, size of a open palm. The voices are heard as they come closer to the cell, Hiai, a woman in officers costume, opens the lock and enters in cell with two guards. She stands right in front of the chained man and explores him from the bottom to top. The chained man is medium muscular builded, but thin, with orange hair. He seems to be at half consciousness. The Hiai opens her reportbook, stands in front of the light source and starts to read.

Hiai: Born in Rakyavir, age twenty five, mother Elisa Ketsueki, father...unknown, name Lucian Ketsueki.

[Flashback]

Its a nice sunny day, an old hag sits on a chair looking after the childrens whom are chasing after frightened chicken, laughing as they fall while trying to catch it. Young, orange haired, boy views them from afar, looking if he can join. One of the children happens to see him staring at others, and runs to tell the old hag. The hag stands up, takes a broom and tries to scare him away.

Old hag: Shu, go away.

She comes dangerously near the boy and swings the broom almost hitting him.

Old hag: I said, go away you damned kid. Leave us be.

Flashback gets disrupted by Hiai who slaps him.

Hiai: Focus, please, it will make my work easier. You agreed to cooperate earlier.

The chained man nods his head in agreement.

Hiai: I will ask you again, who is your father?

The chained man: I don't...don't.

Hiai: So you don't know. Please, give this man some water to drink. Mr. Lucian, did you...

[Flashback]

The scene shows the same orange haired boy watching the TV as his mother walks in.

Elisa: Lucian! Have you no other thing to do than to watch that brutal show all day? Go outside, today is a fine day.

Boy: Mom. Why does people try to avoid me?

Elisa: Some foolish superstition stuff they believe. Don't mind them, they are simple people. You can always do some house work. Maybe you want to come outside and help me with the garden?

Flashback gets again disrupted by another slap on the face.

Hiai: Hey! My patience is almost over! You are accused for murdering over fifty village people, including your family. The crime scene shows that you mostly used axe, but some villagers, whom survived says you killed some of their brethren with bare hands. Is that true?

The chained man: Yes.

Hiai: Your testament is public execution, but you are not the only one here who have blood on his hands. So I got a proposition for you...

[Flashback]

Its night. The land have suffered drought and the village have been experiencing some heavy losses. Orange haired man rushes into his house with an axe in his hands, catching for his breath, he looks around the house searching for his mother.

Orange haired man: Mother! We must hurry and leave this place! The villagers accuse us for the drought! Mother!

He runs around the house, searching for the only person who have accepted him as a human. Still calling for his mother, when finally he stands right in front of the only room he haven't been in, the bedroom. He slowly opens the door, still calling her name, until he finds bleeding dead body on the bed. Holding his feelings inside, except the tears raining from his cheeks, he tightens the grip on his axe looking if the person, who did this, is still in this room. He hears heavy breathing under the bed, and slowly walks by the bed. He raise his axe over his head, ready to swing straight down, takes a deep breath and finally angrily screaming swings his axe down, splitting in half the dead body, with the bed and reaching for the one who was under the bed. The villagers are heard from the distance, marching to his home with flaming torches.

Orange haired man and cleans his tears off: I am sorry, mother...but no more! NO MORE!

The man picks up his axe, now with blood dripping off it, and leaves the room.

[Flashback ends]

Previously chained person, now unchained, snaps out from his meditation state, when [NPC] comes into his cell.

Hiai: Your fight is coming. So what will be your stage name?

The chained man: Pain.

The scene fades off.


Last edited by Pain on Thu Sep 19, 2013 7:11 pm; edited 1 time in total (Reason for editing : Finished)

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Re: The beginning of Pain

Post by Pain on Tue Sep 17, 2013 6:05 pm

It is still unfinished, the plan will come later today and also NPC which will be my private one.

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Re: The beginning of Pain

Post by Guest on Tue Sep 17, 2013 9:05 pm

Nice, well done Smile

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Re: The beginning of Pain

Post by Pain on Thu Sep 19, 2013 7:12 pm

Finished this one, and ty Chris Wink I only wish I could make more but right now I am a bit busy, but will have some free time tomorrow, so I will come up with one more RP.

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